This is a really amazing illustration! You seem to have a good grasp at texture, shading and foreshortening but i do have a few suggestions. if you edited the ground a little more and added an element of terrain i think that it would improve the piece greatly but that is just me nitpicking. overall i think you did a really great job especially on the character themselves. keep up the good work!

THIS IS SO CUTE!! I love this character's design and your use of thick lines really make it pop. I also like how you used slightly muted colors so its cute without hurting the viewers eyes or messing with the fact she is a vampire which is classically a darker creature. I do have one critique though and that is if you plan to animate this character (i would assume you do based of its simplicity and line weight) I would suggest you maybe limit the colors just slightly maybe by changing the yellow shirt to be pink like the hat ribbon and umbrella or vice versa. Keep up the great work!

i really love this illustration! i think you did a really good job especially with the contrast of dark character colors to bright background and realistic body to cartoon-y head/mask it really gives the character and illustration a unique feel. good job keep up the great work!